Sunday, July 26, 2026

scene 22 bookmark

sc 21

INT. DWNTOWN LARAMIE COFFEE SHOP - DAY

Wanda and Daisy looking at the selfie that Tom has taken, unbeknownst to Hunter and Chloe in background. 

DAISY: So tell me everything you know about her.

WANDA: Well, she'll be starting her senior year in high school in San Luis Obispo where she lives with her mother Barbara, turns eighteen November second. She's a surfer, gets grade good enough to earn a scholarship and is trending, quote, toward environmental science studies. Her grandparents John and Jan are retired attorneys in Paso Robles. 

DAISY: Well that's nearby, isn't  it.

WANDA: Half hour. Ruth was out that way a few years ago on a winery tour vacation she really enjoyed. 

DAISY: I imagine she's enjoying this turn of events.

WANDA: I wouldn't be surprised if this weren't already framed and placed on a shelf.

SERVER ARRIVES, recognizes Tom in selfie. Brief exchange. 


CUT TO

INT. RITH'S READING ROOM 

Intimate, warmed by sunlight through window to yard.

FLOOR CREAK before Ruth enters, places selfie, framed, just on shelf with Hunter's books. 

She leaves, FLOOR CREAK.

Tuesday, July 21, 2026

scene 21

scene beats 1-20

[FROM PREVIOUS NIGHT, to be edited]

____________________________________

EXT. HUNTER'S DRIVEWAY - DAY

MOTOR-WHIR of garage door opening to reveal Tom and Chloe waiting, Hunter putting two backpacks in back of Rover. 

Tom cowboy as usual, worn jeans and boots. Chloe and Hunter in jeans, hiking boots, ballcaps. Hunter unbuttoned long-sleeve over tee, Chloe sports a "Steamer's Lane, Santa Cruz" raglan long-sleeve.

Chloe leads Tom to truck, Hunter into Rover, backs it to street/curb.

CHLOE: Cool truck.

TOM: Like it?

CHLOE: Love the two-tone.

TOM: Ain't the original paint but same colors. This was my dad's last truck.

CHLOE: Really?

TOM: Yes, ma'am.

CHLOE:  Can I see inside?

TOM: Course ya can. Need to get my sunglasses anyway. Got a car at home?

He gets keys from pants pocket.

CHLOE: No. When I go to college.

He unlocks, opens driver's door,

TOM: How do you get to school?

CHLOE: Bike. 

He gets aviator shades from visor sleeve, puts in shirt pocket. 

CHLOE:  Bitchen bench seat and saddle blanket cover.

TOM:  Put it in about a year ago. Center folds down into a console. 

He demonstrates, puts back in seat mode. Hunter parks, approaches. 

CHLOE: Nice dash upgrade.

TOM: Friend a mine did that. Kind of a stylized nod to the original while keepin' up with technology. 

CHLOE: Do you have another car?

TOM: Older Subaru Outback. That's what we're usually in when we visit Ruth.         

Hunter arrives.

CHLOE: This was Tom's dad's last truck.

HUNTER: Really?

TOM: Yessir. 

HUNTER: Mid-eighties.

TOM: Eighty-seven. Bought it new off the lot in Houston on the way home from an Oilers game.

CHLOE: Who-slash-what are the Oilers?

TOM: Football team that don't exist anymore.

CHLOE: Oh. 

HUNTER: Nice upgrades. What's under the hood? 

TOM: Five-seven three-fifty long block crate I dropped in a few years ago. 

Chloe's eyes find the early-90s red Alfa Romeo Spider, top down, nearing from the direction Tom arrived.  

CHLOE: I spy a spider.

Hunter and Tom turn their attention to the car.

HUNTER: Heeere's Jackie.  

Hunter walks to the street to guide Jackie to driveway and garage as if an aircraft marshaller pointing a jet to gate. Tom closes driver's door, watches with Chloe as Jackie arrives.

CHLOE: No. When I start college.  

Jackie steers into the driveway, long hair in a tail under her ballcap.

TOM: Nervous about meeting Jackie?

CHLOE: I was. Until you took all my nervous away. 

Hunter meets Jackie where she parks in the Rover's spot. Jackie, 50ish, fit, jeans, cowgirl boots, untucked western style blouse, puts sunglasses on bill of ballcap, gets out, gets backpack from passenger seat, greets Hunter's quick kiss.

JACKIE: And I was nervous about meeting Chloe.

HUNTER: You'll be quickly at ease.

JACKIE: And cowboy I reckon.  

He takes her hand, leads to Tom and Chloe coming to them.

JACKIE: How's it going?

HUNTER: Well.

JACKIE: Cool.

They meet Tom and Chloe.

HUNTER: So. Jackie, I'm happy to introduce you to Chloe and Tom. Tom and Chloe, meet Jackie.

Tom tips his hat, he, Chloe and Jackie exchange handshakes and variations of hello good to meet you.

JACKIE: Tom, rumor is this isn't your first rodeo.

HUNTER: I been to a few. Hunter told me what your cousin's doin' with the horse rescue and the kids. I think it's a wonderful thing.

JACKIE: So far so good. And we have another late addition to the posse. My cousin's girlfriend is coming from Oklahoma and should be there when we arrive.

HUNTER: The more the merrier.

JACKIE: In this case for sure. 

HUNTER: Shall we?

JACKIE: Let's.

Hunter activates garage closure, the MOTOR-WHIR as they walk to the Rover. Hunter opens the front passenger door for Jackie, Chloe gets in behind her, Tom goes around to the other side, gets in next to Chloe and behind Hunter in the driver's seat. All buckle up, Hunter starts the engine, drives away in the direction Tom had to hide, continues straight, turns left out of view. 

Tuesday, July 14, 2026

scene beats 1-20

1. Night. Tom, Wanda, Hawaii, Foglost.

2. Sunrise. Truck, Wyoming, re Daisy, Tom Leaves.

3. Sunset. Tom arrive ABQ motel.

4. Sunrise. Tom leaves ABQ motel.

5. John, Jan, Chloe, Barb, re Jackie and Horse Day, SLO airport.

6. Hunter home office, Chloe photos, Organ Mountains.

7. Tom nearing, Hunter's 'hood.

8. Hunter kitchen/dining, bag, leaves.

9. Tom arrive, idle, camera, Hunter, Tom leaves, hides, U-turn.

10. Hunter, foyer, doorbell, howdy, enter Tom.

______________________________________________


11. Chloe on plane, Hunter's call re Tom. Call mom (with grams and gramps).

12. John, Jan, Barbara, Hunter's call. Middle name.

13. Tom, Hunter's guest room, calls Wanda. Wanda with Daisy. 

14. Ruth, Tom's call. Tom leaves, arrive stone wall, selfie.

15. Gil, Foglost, Tom selfie, hijole.

16. Hunter, Chloe airport parking, how Tom found out.

17. Barbara tells Brian about Tom and Olivia.

18. Hunter, Chloe arrive, Tom and intros.

19. Sunset. John and Jan at home. Re call Kate tomorrow.

20. Night. Hunter, Chloe, Tom, post-dinner, re Wanda and Hawaii. About a horse.